Saturday, 16 October 2010

The incredibly naughty,slimy Spiderman. Part 1

One day the Lego policeman were walking about looking for robbers when they were stopped by a sudden noise. It was the incredibly naughty, slimy Spiderman. They had heard his giant footsteps. Because they were such tiny policeman he seemed MASSIVE!


He loomed above them and he BOOMED, 'You need to work for me you horrible little things'  'Run' one of the little Lego policeman cried and they took off really fast. Suddenly Mosh and some of  his GOGO friends saw what Spiderman was doing and jumped on his head to confuse him and tried to stop him from following the policeman by pulling him back. The Lego policemen managed to escape.

Spiderman was defeated...this time.

by Frankie Hill
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7 comments:

  1. RedTedArt17 October 2010 at 00:57

    Oh! What an awesome story, Frankie!

    Well done you!! Keep 'em coming!!

    Maggy

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  2. LitLass17 October 2010 at 06:19

    I love this story. I'm going to show it to my 7-year-old.

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  3. Anonymous17 October 2010 at 06:46

    That's super ;-)!

    My son is very impressed and cannot wait for part 2!

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  4. Inside the Wendy House17 October 2010 at 11:28

    Great story. I like reading my little girl's stories and I really enjoyed reading yours too!!

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  5. Richard18 October 2010 at 09:24

    That's very good Frankie, hope we get some more soon

    Grandad

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  6. Unknown20 October 2010 at 08:35

    Well done Frankie,
    I enjoyed the story very much. Looking foward to the next part.
    Love
    Gran

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  7. Unknown21 October 2010 at 14:52

    Wow!
    Thank you Frankie for a very exciting story.
    I wonder what will happen next?
    I can't wait to find out
    Gr. Ant xx

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